RedMoon
Naruto Fanfiction
By Perfect Psionic Soldier
In the times of now
When legends sing
There existed one
He who walked the lands
Dancing in battle
Death trailed his every move
Anguish with his very passing
He was evil made flesh
Personification of power
With his demon eye
He existed
Demon Saint
A man
A living legend
The last of
Of a past that would not die
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto but I do own the original creations in
this fic. So Demon Saint, who by pure twist of fate, Looks and responds to the
name ‘Naruto’ is all pure cosmic coincidence and in fact, I own this artificial
character. D
Holy Crap! An update! Are you dreaming!…
Yes, yes you are. Now to remember this dream, please donate money to the
lazy author fund to get me writing the next chap… Enjoy.
-Chapter Five-
Demon Eye of Demon Saint
Naruto quickly ran forward, running silently along the roof and walls as
he stalked from the shadows. To those who did not know where to look, he was
merely a shadow and with the ease of experience, he quickly caught up to his
prey.
They were only a group of four as far as he could tell, and they ran in
a loose diamond formation. Each person in the group was scanning their
surroundings, protecting themselves from the shadows. It was fairly ironic that
he was using the very cover that they were trying to pierce.
With a raised eyebrow, Naruto quickly scanned them for telltale sign of
their forehead protectors and didn’t see them as he trailed from behind. It was
obvious that they were intruders, their slightly tense and yet grim eyes told
him that much. They were moving too quickly and since they were going away from
the central shinobi office, they could have been heading out to a mission but
their actions told otherwise.
This group seemed very occupied with their surroundings. Even though
they didn’t look like they were immediately studying every shadow, nook and
cranny, their eyes told otherwise as the eyes darted from place to place.
The fact that they didn’t carry leaf protectors also put them out of
position. Their overly cautious steps and constant scanning that he had seen
many a time during his life. It was the practice of intruders, stalking through
enemy territories.
With a brief sniff, Naruto found he could almost taste the blood on two
of them. The stains in their clothing that were masked with a strong scent of
leaves, but to him, a man who had all but consistently bathed in blood, it was
so effortless for him to detect it. It was exactly like a person who caught the
whiff of a favored meal and could trace it to the ends of the earth.
Though he could have been wrong and they were simply a team quickly
moving out on a specific mission….
Naruto found himself
grinning at that thought. He was no longer naive enough to believe such things
at face value and instead found to trust himself, and what his gut told him was
that he was going to kill another few people tonight. Perhaps indulge himself
and sample a little of that blood.
The team of four, feeling
a growing sense of unease, quickly sped forward as their pretense of caution
vanished, moving as fast as their legs could carry them. Though they couldn’t
identify the source, they were experienced enough to know that they were being
hunted by something. They instinctively realized that this hunter was a dark
and sinister one.
Speeding up as well,
Naruto’s blank eye shimmered for a brief moment, the prospect of more death
brought a wider grin to his face as he tailed behind the four. They were as
good as dead if they proved to be enemies of the leaf and the sight of spilling
blood was something that soothed his need for violence. If they turned out to
be people that he didn’t like, then it was a simply nice bonus.
Within a few minutes,
standing at the edge of the village, Naruto found his eyebrows raise a notch as
the group he was trailing leapt onto the walls simply jumped forward, landing
in the midst of two groups.
The group closest to the
wall had the popular leaf green color plastered all over their choice of
clothes, indicating leaf shinobi, while a second group staring at the leaf and
were anything but color coordinated. The landing group surprised neither sides
but the group quickly scooted over the other side, facing the leaf in what
seemed to be a dramatic showdown.
Crossing his arms before
him, Naruto found yet another grin make its way onto his face as he stared at
the scene before him. The thoughts of him interfering crisscrossed his mind as
he weighted the facts before himself. He could help but his love of leaf had
long since faded into a nagging tolerance for anyone that he didn’t personally
know.
While on the other hand,
he could just leave them alone and watch them slaughter each other and then he
could maybe mop up the rest and then go to bed. Maybe take a bath if he felt
like it. However, his contemplations were interrupted as another group of
people made it to the scene.
Escorted by a handful of
jounins, the Hokage herself strode forward in quick but conserved strides. By
her side stood the legendary beast, the infamous copycat ninja and three others
he couldn’t identify at the moment.
Tsunade halted at the
forefront of her ninjas, her body cloaked in the traditional Hokage robes,
minus the hat and she looked rather intimidating as she frowned at the
intruders before her.
They rounded out to an uneven
number, thirteen. A rather unlucky number if she said so herself. But she was
one of the legendary three, a medic ninja that was and, perhaps, still is the
greatest to have walked these lands.
That and that fact that
Jaraiya was already on his way here helped her confidence a great deal.
Supported by among the finest that Konoha had to offer, she felt rather
invincible at the moment and for a brief second, wondered if the third often
felt this way.
The frown on her face
deepened for a flicker as she recognized a few of the intruders before herself.
With a glance she noticed that her jounins were also a tad tense, meaning that
this was no ordinary band of rogue ninjas. Should her bingo book been properly
updated, then the lot before her were all within the ever fun, A class
missing-nins.
Her frown continued to
deepen despite the fact that she was more then prepared to fight and sacrifice
the lives of those beside her to save the village. It was a burden that she
neither took lightly nor enjoyed. It came with the job and she had long since
accepted it. Though her reason of becoming Hokage was currently considered a
threat, she held on, if only to attempt to hold threads of her more fond
memories together.
To her, each shinobi was
more then a tool that they were trained to be. Each person had a life that they
lead; memories that made up their lives and precious things that they would
each give their lives to protect. Just like the previous Hokages.
Though she wasn’t the
first Hokage to defend her home village, she was damn sure that she wasn’t
going to be the first one to fail in such a task. With a slight frown at the
prospect of possible defeat, everything began to move.
The fight began instantly
as two of the intruders leapt forward, their hands blurring in seals right
before they released their attacks, forcing the defending leaf to scatter as
two large fireballs lit up the night sky and charbroiled grass and dirt.
Everyone was instantly
paired against an opponent as they danced about, small shurikens filled the air
with their whistling tunes and kunais were drawn to spill the blood of others.
For Tsunade herself and
her two guards, Kakashi and Gai, they stood still as they faced off five
intruders. None of them had yet to move a finger, but the air was tense between
them, each person waiting for the other to act so that they could capitalize on
the openings that would eventually come about.
Two of the five intruders
leapt off in opposite directions, their intent was to simply circle around
them. With a nod, her two jounins went off to intercept and stop their plan
before anything could happen.
The other three however,
instantly sprang into action and before Tsunade could even react properly. With
widened eyes she realized that her body was responding to her thoughts
extremely sluggishly. As a revered medic-nin, it took her scant heartbeats
before she noticed her body already under attack, the residual electricity
suddenly sparked around her peripheral vision.
Her heightened senses
kicked into overdrive as she realized that the attack had come from below, the
ember bright scriptures for a seal glowed briefly before her eyes. Within that
split second when she was hit, the runes burst outwards, ensnaring her in
electric sparks and dazed her.
The realization that she
had fallen into a trap came a second later, but it was already too late as the
three were already beginning their attacks. In union they drew back their
shuriken and threw them, followed by hand-seals. A unanimous cry of “Shuriken
Kage Bushin no Jutsu” echoed in the air briefly before it was filled with a
hail of spinning sounds.
With a feminine grunt, the
fifth Hokage of hidden leaf began her plans of vengeance as she drew chakra to
her forehead, the small diamond like seal absorbing her energies freely as she
prepared to activate her trump card. Though the shuriken had a lower chance of
killing then a kunai, the sheer number was going to hurt like a bitch.
Tsunade gritted her teeth
in momentary frustration, she had lost count of the incoming weapons at around
150, and she knew that the incoming injuries were unavoidable but she swore to
herself she would kill the bastard that did the most damage to her youthful
body before she dealt with the other two.
Her field of vision
however suddenly blurred and Tsunade found herself heavily disoriented, the
light sounds of countless shuriken embedding themselves filled her ears. She
then blinked in confusion as there was no expected pain and as she struggled to
focus, her senses sluggishly returning to her. Which lead to the eventual
discovery that she was extremely close to someone who had none of the leaf’s
scent on them, but it was strangely familiar.
She wanted to leap away
but it quickly became apparent that she was being held down by something. A
strong something as her strength seemed to wilt before the mountain before her.
A feat in itself and Tsunade felt a growing sense of panic of being overpowered
as anyone with more raw strength then herself was a definite bad sign.
It took a moment to
register that she was sitting down on what she presumed was a leg and that its
owner also had its arms wrapped around her midriff while its head was resting
on her abdomen, right before her taut stomach.
The urge to escape and
destroy the blithering idiot who dared to manhandle her body quickly vanished
as the familiarity of the person’s scent slammed home. It was a scent that she
had specifically memorized earlier today.
The world instantly came
back into painful focus and Tsunade found herself blinking as she saw her ‘brother’
snuggling against her body, the same brother that had refused a hug hours
before. Deciding not to question the reason, she instead hugged Naruto herself,
a content sigh escaping from his lips as he snuggled in a touch closer.
Looking up, Tsunade found
her eyebrows lift a notch as she realized that she was at least five meters
away from the ambush from the trio and judging by how a kunai was sticking out
of the heart of one of her attackers, she had only two others to worry about.
The patch of shuriken sticking up like grass, where she was standing scant
moments ago, was also interesting to look at as a few shuriken began to lose
stability and with a small pop, vanished back into nothingness.
“You have horrible luck,
neechan,” Naruto stated with a content sigh as he felt her warm body against
his. He knew her enough so that he didn’t have to move to see her frowning down
at him. “I guess I’ll help you today…”
Lifting his head, Naruto
found a sadistic grin grow on his face as the two previous attackers rushed up
beside him, one to each side. Their momentum allowed their bodies to slow down
to react to counterattacks while their arms continued with their own attacks in
blinding speeds. Their attack would have pierce flesh and bone with their force
alone, while their other arms were prepared to launch a new assault depending
how the target dodged.
Their attack itself
however was instantly stopped short.
A loud heartbeat echoed in
her chest and mind as Tsunade found herself momentarily paralyzed, pain wracking
in her chest. Specifically, her heart did a very unnatural twitch. The attacker
to her left coughed and fell to his knees while the right person simply choked
out blood and fell face forward. Only the person to her left continued to move
as coughs racked his body, blood splattering out of his mouth with each
unstoppable spasm.
Looking down at the man,
she catalogued his symptoms. Disorientation, visible sweat, trouble breathing,
dizziness, hand clutched over the heart… it took her but a moment to realized
that he was recovering from something along the lines of a extreme form of a
stroke.
It would have been ironic
had her opponent died in such a manor, however she wanted more time to think on
the matter but she shrugged the thoughts aside as a shrill whistle signaled the
invaders to regroup.
Staring down at Naruto,
Tsunade found her eyes widen. It wasn’t the fact that there was an evil grin on
his face. No that would have been fine, however it was the fact that his right
eye had suddenly shimmered into life.
His entire right eye
flooded into a solid ruby red as a black circle simultaneously outlined his
eye. Sapphire blue then burst forth from a nightmarish black pupil that was
contorting itself into a vertical slit, seemingly absorbing life and light into
itself. The fact that it was also glowing gave his grin an eerie life of it
own.
With a dry swallow,
Tsunade found herself not seeing the person within the shell, but the shell
itself. In all her life as a shinobi, she had thought that she had seen it all.
This on the other hand easily took the cake, including the time she had that
nightmare of losing a poker game to Jiraiya and becoming his love slave when
they were still genin…
Suddenly self conscious,
the fifth Hokage of the leaf found herself feeling uneasy as she sat not upon
the lap of Uzumaki Naruto, but upon the lap of the Demon Saint, who with his
Demon Eye slaughtered all who stood in his way.
The pure sapphire blue
eyes swam through a lagoon of ruby blood as it searched the field before them,
scanning at each ally and opponent. It had also uncomfortably settled on her
for a scant few moments, cataloguing her looks before moving on again. One of
the missing-nins began to shake in raw fear.
She had heard the stories
of his ventures, of his insatiable battle lust and the fact that he seemed to
enjoy ripping people apart for amusement alone. Though she now had to admit,
seeing him in real life, staring ahead with such an evil grin and cold eyes,
she couldn’t help but let out a silent whimper. How she kept her cool was
something she would ask herself for days to come.
Tilting his head so that
his normal eye drooped down, letting his midnight black pupil level off on
those before himself, Naruto found himself once again experience the same
tantalizing taste of raw power rushing through his veins.
This was life! The
screaming dominance that dwelt in the darker parts of his mind and soul surged
forth with the strength born only of those who were demonic. It was this
feeling that gave him his urge to kill, to spill blood and allow his eyes to
fill with the sight of death and destruction. It was this feeling that he
portrayed to the world through the most simple of arrogant gestures, he
grinned.
He felt the woman on his
lap tense, the scent of her unease and slight fear heightened his sense of
smell as his nose searched for more of that appetizing aroma. The fact that he
knew this person, knew this person well was of little importance as he barely
remembered her name. He was willing to protect her by killing all those that
wanted to harm her here and now. To him, that was enough to know of her.
With a slow smile, he let
the woman off his lap, relishing at the close contact of flesh of one who
seemed to care for him. She was soft and he couldn’t help but nuzzle his cheek
against her exposed skin, right below her neck and allowed himself to linger in
her warmth, to relax with the rhythms of her beating heart.
It was a moment of
peaceful bliss for himself. He rarely had moments like these. Though the moment
lost its serenity as he remembered what truly eased the pain in his mind, body
and soul. It was fulfilling the craving that soothed his aches and pains.
The craving to harm those
who irritated him, their very existence, aggravated his consciousness and that
would not do. Those that gnawed at his peace were not simply doomed, by were
just living on borrowed time. The moment they irked him, they were as good as
dead. It was only a matter of time before their luck ran out and he found them
again. His glaring eyes were the last things that so many of them saw.
His grin turning into a
darker smirk, he moved away from the warm girl and found himself the center of
attention, as everyone seemed to focus on him. His every move seemed to be
taken with a measure of caution as recognition of his demonic eye settled on
the minds of all present.
They had all heard of his
nickname. The Demon Saint who killed all those who stood in his way. He was
known across the continent under many titles that all were referred to him.
The Fallen Angel of
Konoha, the Great Stalker of Death, the Eye of Terror, he had heard them all
and were amused by them. The most universal nickname was the one he kept. Demon
Saint and it often came with the addition, Of Demon Eye. A good nickname if he
thought so himself. It made him feel powerful.
“So the Cross-Eyed Leaf
rodent rears its ugly head.”
Blinking in surprise and
slight shock, the man known as Demon Saint turned his head slightly to the man
who dared utter such a horrid reference. Really now, what kind of man gave out
a queasy and uninspired name such as that?
“Ha. Ha.” Naruto stated
mirthlessly with a frown as he zeroed in on the speaker, an undistinguished man
who bore the cross out marking of Suna, the village of sand. “How by hell did
you come up with such a freakishly poor name as that?”
“It’s a gift, Now why
don’t you make like a tree… and leaf?” the man stated with a straight face. It
held for a brief moment before it cracked under his abysmal attempts at humor.
Even a few of his comrades groaned at the remark.
“How punny,” Naruto said
as he stopped a good two meters before the soon to be killed man. “Any last
words before I rip off your arms and gut you?”
The Sand-nin lifted his
eyebrows in mock surprise as he opened his mouth. “Awww, is the little kitty
going to bite? Why don’t you make like a banana and split? Or go the library
and book it? Or! GrraAAaaAaHhhHhHh!”
The sudden eruption of
pain as ones’ arms being ripped off mercilessly made itself known to the bad
missing-pun-nin as his arms exploded off in a shower of blood and were expelled
to either side.
The fact that the missing
nin barely had time to register the movements of the man he was ridiculing was
lost on him as he coughed up mucus stained blood and his body teetered from the
sudden offset of losing two arms worth of weight.
“Well, to be fair, I am
going to do a magic act with the saying, ‘When it rains, it pours.’” Naruto
stated as if he was on stage and used it in a slow sentence while he raised his
right hand, spread his fingers slightly, as though each of his fingernails was
a in fact razor sharp and in a flourish, slashed the man across his main body.
“For my final words to
you, Why don’t You make like a Bee and Buzzoff?” Naruto paused for a moment to
taste the air at his homemade pun and then scrunched his face as the words hit
home. “Feh, okay, So I am not the greatest in puns.”
His general mood however,
lightened as he looked down at the man who was looking ahead in a dazed
fashion. “By the way, im a fox, not a cat. Try to rememeber that as you die,”
with a smirk that screamed out smug, Naruto turned around and calmly walked
away to stare at the other opponents. The missing nin on the other hand let out
a gurgle right before a bloody explosion of a thick red mist erupted from what
was left of the man’s body as it tried its hardest to release all of its
internal fluids into the open air.
The other missing-nins
felt themselves twitch as the Demon Saint began to casually stroll towards
them, the left over twitching body was hard to ignore as the haze of blood
began to settle.
At ten meters distance,
the leftover invading forces were seriously contemplating retreat as half their
numbers were already dead, killed by the Konoha Shinobi and half of their
deaths were because of one man.
The surviving numbers were
preparing to flee back into the forest, their bodies tensed for the moment when
they would all break away and vanish into the comforting darkness. There they
could fully let the fear seep out of their systems and a few could cry
themselves to sleep.
With a blink, the Demon
Saint vanished. There was no smoke or hand seals. He suddenly vanished mid step
and though they didn’t sense where he appeared by smell, sight or sound, the
man’s oppressive gaze gave clear indication of where he was.
As one, the entire
missing-nins turned their head towards their escape rout and frowned in
desperation as a wave of pure killer intent washed over them, locking their
muscles and turning their wills into mush. The knowledge that he could kill
them before they could escape was unmistakably demonstrated. They were most
likely going to die within the next few minutes.
Two of their numbers
quickly broke off, rushing towards the leisurely walking demon and in unison
formed a hand seal, both people creating a dozen shadow clones apiece and threw
out a wall of shurikens.
The Demon Saint’s eye lit
up in amusement before he vanished once again, appearing beside two different
shinobi and with his fingers tensed as though they were claws, he slashed
through their throats. The two ninjas clutched at their throats as life seeped
between their fingers, blood spraying out of their torn necks.
There was a mass popping
sound as all the other shadow clones suddenly vanished while the dead bodies of
the owners fell to the ground in a dramatic scene. The Demonic Eye shone with
what had to be unholy delight as he continued to move forward.
The shaking missing-nin of
Hidden Sound finally broke out of the Demon Saint’s killer intent, his muscles
wobbled as he felt his companions sneer slightly at his show of cowardice but
he was beyond caring. With a dry swallow he took note that one of his numbers
had gone missing. He tried to recall where the person was since he was right
beside his left arm and he was positive that he wasn’t among the dead yet.
The sound of a kicked rock
instantly brought the man back to his senses and he started to forcibly cough
in order to clear his throat. It was a miracle but he knew that he would live
through this night and as the team leader for this botched mission, it was
beyond time to cut his losses and retreat.
Their were less then a
handful of his men left and he wanted to keep his losses short. It also
occurred to him that other then the man to his left, the man behind him was
also gone. If memory served him correctly, the man was the third shadow clone
user in his group and if the clone that was with him was gone, then it meant
that he was dead.
With a silent curse, the
team leader took a second to wonder when the Demon Saint had killed the man
hiding in the woods. The second came to an abrupt halt as the Demon Saint
pierced the soft earth and with a grin of a pleased foxlike cat, he threw his
right arm outwards, pulling it out of the earth and dragging out a body with
it.
The body hung in the air
for a few spins, showing everyone how the bastard died mid scream, foot
long(30cm) lacerations raked across his chest, over the lungs and one across
the back, over and through the spine.
It was the thud of the
man’s body that spurred the team leader into action as he quickly walked
towards the Demon Saint, head held low in respect and submission. Memories of
his old team, his loyal and dead teammates floated back to him in ragged
slashes of a bad slide show.
The man’s original team
had been wiped out in the same fashion as his current team was. Except then, he
had survived due to sheer luck, just as he was about to now. Speaking in a
clear voice, he stopped a full meter away from the demonic man. “For the lives
of my team, I have a information that I am sure you are interested in, Lord
Pride!”
Swallowing in
apprehension, the leader of the remaining unit of four clenched his jaw
stressfully as he tried his hardest to not squirm under the scrutiny of the
demonic eye, which was currently intensifying.
“Speak.”
The leader blinked at the
short command. There was no doubt that he would not listen to the command. He
opened his mouth to spill the words that would allow him and his men to live.
The memories of his final moments with his team flooding his memories as he
spoke, “You are being searched out by Greed, who will enter Konoha by the next
full moon in order to find out where you could be. He is angered over Avarice’s
death. The one known as Lust is also searching you out, Lord Pride.”
Frowning, the one also known
as ‘Pride’ could only grind his teeth in anger as his demon eye fed off his
rolling emotions at the name of one of his enemies. He was angry and pleased,
hot with anticipation and cold with expectations. Yet, above all he felt the
scalding hatred for the one known as ‘Greed’ and would do much to gain the
opportunity to gut that son of a bitch again.
“Go.” He had spoken in a
curt tone at shivering man before himself and he idly noted that the man was
backing off slowly while making motions for his remaining allies to flee.
The ninjas of leaf would
do nothing, he knew, as they would not tempt fate and try to countermand his
allowance for the invaders to go. It would have been stupid to act against him
right now, since even they could most likely feel his unstable hatred flow
within his veins.
Then he noticed that the
leader type idiot was ordering one of his allies to stop. With a slight eye
twitch of annoyance, the man known as Demon Saint felt the amusement of the
battle bleed out of him as he watched dispassionately as a former member of
hidden leaf rushed him.
When the missing-leaf-nin
reached striking distance, Naruto allowed himself to frown as the euphoria of
the fight dissipated from his system. The knowledge that one of the seven was
still after him, though no surprise was aggravating since he thought that he
had dealt with that nuisance of a man. The leading man had spoken the truth, as
the man had been marked by greed and it showed in the man’s eyes when Greed was
mentioned
His body blurred, his
hands and legs striking in practiced ease, hitting twelve of thirteen vital and
open points of the woman’s body, crushing bones and flesh in a single symphony
of brutal aggression before he delivered the final blow.
It was a seemingly casual
strike, a momentary flick of the right arm and a perfect snap at the wrist,
propelling the hand forward into the chest of the attacking woman who had
instantly stopped short with the first hit, her body to confused and
disoriented with what the mind told it to do and what damage it had
experienced.
There was a wrenching
sound as Naruto ripped out her heart, the woman who could not have been more
then thirty stumbled back half a step before she began to fall to her knees.
She could only stare in mixed shock, pain and horror at what was ripped out of
her. There was a brief flash of twisted and red and blue from a demonic right
eye before he crushed the vital organ in his hand, sending blood everywhere.
Her last moments were filled with raining blood, disbelief and a glowing blue
eye swimming through the falling blood, carrying pain and hatred packed into a
proud gaze.
“Go before I make you join
your companions at the base of Snowy Mountain. Your luck grows shorter by the
second. I had no time then, I do now.” Naruto spat out in annoyance, the death
of the woman before him only soothed his anger momentarily as he licked at the
splotches of blood that stained his lips.
The missing-sound-nin
could only nod in horror as the memories of the past and present overlaid
together and he ran, giving out a final, strained command to retreat and fled
himself, only to find himself running alone as his teammates had instantly out
dashed him and within a blink, vanished into the night forest.
A low growl escaped his
own lips as Naruto lifted his towards the caressing light of the moon. His
temper had suddenly become raw as his mind dwelt on the treacherous Greed the
remaining members of the seven.
With a spit of displeasure
over the bitter taste of the dead leaf woman, Naruto simply glanced back at
Tsunade, making sure she was still alive before he simply turned away and
walked into the shadows of the night.
He was suddenly hit with
another craving, it was a unstoppable compulsion to bath under this pale white
moonlight, maddeningly weak as it was, the urge nonetheless gnawed away at his
body, mind and soul as he longed to lounge under a moon he had but seen once,
long ago.
(“ ) ( “ )> (>
”)> Author’s Corner:
Now to say a few things.
Why have I not updated before? The answer is simple, I live in a different time
stream then you reading people. What do I mean? Well for you a lot of time has
passed since my last chapter. For me? It feels like a updated a few weeks ago P
And to address some
oddities of my writing that I may or may not had said before, I am attempting
to write within give or take a few paragraphs, within approx. 10 pages,
excluding the poem, disclaimer, title and my beloved Author’s Corner.
Why? Well, that is because
if Masashi Kishimoto (Person who created Naruto) can stuff a chap of the manga
into 19pages, I can stuff something feasible into 10.
As for why names like,
Pride, Greed, Lust? I watched too much Full Metal Alchemist, that’s why. The
characters most likely wont be the same, maybe Lust cause I thought she was
fairly hot, but there are no homunculus in this series though. But why do I
need that when I can explain their powers via hidden, never seen until now
bloodlines? ;)
I am doing this as a
direct release and as such, there will be mistakes and whatnot until I get
around to editing this sucker, give or take a month or thirty-six.
For those who will eventually look over this chapter and say, OMGWTF,
Naruto is way tooo overpowered, like a Super Saiyen fused with Unicron, who
then absorbed the philosopher stone, Al and all, and restarted his char, New
Game, with the previous stats but at lvl 1 a million times over and then
gamesharked the sucker while throwing free mass exp into the mix via osmosis… (Kudos
to those who actually followed that I said, and I declare you NERD!) All I have
to say is suck it up, don’t tell me that since I already ‘Know’ this and the
other ‘Seven’ are appropriately equalized via Mathematics and whatever pops
into my head at the time. I will also think upon the leftover titles of “Greed”,
“Envy”, “Anger”, “Sloth”, and “Gluttony”. I already have Naruto as “Pride” and
he killed off “Avarice” since I could care less about the loss of feelings and
compassion between people since in the end, I would more or less remake Sasuke
with a more obscure name P
Well, other then that, I guess you reviewing bastards get blamed for
this chapter. How dare you make me feel good about myself and start a new
chapter! Like who likes to be complimented anymore?
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Waitaminute… I do! So erm, beloved fans… I hope you enjoyed the chap
since I was worried about cramming this sucker in under 10 pages and make it
all cool and stuff and since this did go over 10 pages, I am ashamed…
Like any of you care.
Anyways, I am done ranted at the end of my chapter for the sole benefit
that I am wasting your precious time with meandering words and senselessly
cohesive yet correct wordings within acceptable sentence structures. Aka I am
wasting time using big words that should you understand them, make sense.
I am off, pray for me via money Hint! Hint!
Oo now how do I unbold that ‘hint hint’ since I didn’t go out of my way
to bold it?
Glory that is MSWord P
Anyways, I am off to wait for my meager rations of reviews over this
chap and think about updating my other junk.
Good Morning / Good day / Goodnight
Love Me!
PPS