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So, a lot has happened in
the time while I was dead. I changed quite a bit in this story (below are the
list of changes per chapter; I suggest you re-read the important ones). The
biggest of these is the removal of the demonic training world Na'zal. Na'zal
actually has a history that is rooted into certain things in the real world
back in 2005, back when I had only started writing this story. Those things
don't hold true anymore and Na'zal doesn't really fit with the new course of
the story; and keeping it has only managed to cause problems. I tried to save
it, even to some extend, thinking maybe to refer back to it in flashbacks, but
it just wasn't happening. So after much deliberation I have decided to take it
out of the story completely. I apologize to anyone that may have been looking
forward to it.
EDITED CHAPTERS:
01 - Add/delete; definite re-read.
02 - Some changes to Naruto's personality; redressed Naruto; being more
explicit about Supremacies.
03 - Some changes to Naruto's personality.
04 - Fixed that little error about Naruto knowing Haku's name even though Haku
hadn't introduced himself. Small battle details added/edited.
05 - Added comic relief.
06 - Added a quick tidbit about angels that will be important later (3rd arc).
07 - Just some grammatical changes.
08 - Added a scene between the Ancient and Zeph. Changed the reason for the
fight between Naruto and Tsunade.
09 - Added a short scene between the Ancient and Zeph.
10 - Ruins fix.
11 - Added a scene between the Ancient and Zeph (Uchiha history).
12 - Grammatical changes.
13 - Changed a jutsu and grammatical changes.
14 - Added the lemon. Changed the time dilation coefficient for the Ancient's
private dimension. Removed Na'zal and added something else.
I will keep refering to the
Kyuubi as 'the Kyuubi' even though she doesn't have nine tails anymore. I think
it would be more confusing if I started calling her 'the Gobi.'
Ancient-Zeph scenes:
Decided that a little show-and-tell of the fact that the Ancient has his own
agenda was in order. These are meant to be vague; in fact they are re-read
several times to make sure sensitive information wasn't revealed. Asking for
details about what the Ancient or Zeph meant by a certain line (while
interesting and fun to read) will go unanswered (unless I'm feeling
particularly generous), unless I screwed up and/or it pertains to information
you already know.
Repost as of 9/25/08. (I will be making reposts as error
catches and/or suggestions come in)
Chapter 15 - Everything in Between
The Ancient had been
recapping and training the Kyuubi in the same things that he had taught Naruto.
However, since she had already heard most of it and had even practiced some of
the taijutsu styles, this was more of an extended fine-tuning session.
The Kyuubi hadn’t just been
training with the Ancient. Now that she was out of the seal, she could freely
prod the Ancient with questions and analyze his responses. So far the immortal
had been playing along, though whether or not he knew about her agenda, he did
not let on. It was during one of these question and answer times that the
Kyuubi finally asked something that had been bothering her since she was
unsealed.
“Hybrid demonic bodies,”
the fox woman paused to gain Yashka’s attention, “You did not give us the whole
truth during the unsealing.”
Yashka was not perturbed by
the question one bit; rather he had been expecting it. “It was a
general-overview explanation.”
“May I ask for the
details?” inquired the woman. “I think I have a right to know the details about
my own body.”
“Sure,” replied the
Ancient. “One thing I want to say beforehand is that I did not lie, I really
can’t give you a purely demonic body because that would tilt the balance of the
human world entirely too much.”
Sofi nodded, “Yes, I
understand that. From that, though, am I to understand that you gave each of us
a half-demon body, the summation of which would make it look like only one
demon coming to the human plane?”
“No, the hybrid-demonic
bodies that I created for you and Naruto are not half-demon bodies,” replied
the Ancient. “They are stronger than half-demon bodies and in theory – and I
must empathize that this is In Theory – your coming back to the human world
should upset the balance, but it won’t.”
“That doesn’t make sense.”
“That is because you are
looking at it from an inhabitant’s perspective,” simply said the Ancient. He
then sighed in a way that Sofi had learned to attribute with a complicated
explanation. “I empathized that it was in theory for one simple reason: your
hybrid demonic bodies are a new creation of mine and therefore are not defined
in the structure of this world. This does not mean that you do not exist. What
this means is that this world has no idea what Balance Laws to apply to you
from moment of creation.”
“Meaning the world just
treats us as unknowns?” queried the fox lady. “Also, aren’t we in the world
right now, so wouldn’t these Balance Laws have already come up?”
“I’ll answer your last
question first. No, my private dimension is not considered part of The World;
it is completely standalone,” explained the immortal. “Now for your first
question, let’s take a step back: a regular demon arrives in the human plane. That
dimension senses this and references several rules that have been set in place
for such events, performs all the necessary functions, and life goes on as
normal. Now, the hybrid bodies it has no idea how to react to because, like you
said, it is an unknown. So what it does is ask me what do to with it, and from
there I can define any rules and conditions I want.”
“Dimension versus world?”
the Kyuubi inquired in hesitant curiosity.
The Ancient nodded lightly
in an understanding way, “I use dimension and world interchangeably; unless I
specifically say that I’m referring to The World as a whole.”
The fox lady nodded and
continued with her previous line of questioning, “So you manipulate this world
as you see fit to accommodate your desires?”
“Yes, what’s wrong with
that?”
There were several things
wrong with that from Sofi’s point of view; mainly the fact that the Ancient was
supposedly the keeper of the balance and hence mostly an observer of the world.
While she may have wanted to voice this opinion, she was constantly reminded of
the fact that if he hadn’t overstepped (in her mind) his boundaries (if there
really was such a thing for him) then she and Naruto would have never been
separated into two independent beings. While it seemed that the Ancient handled
criticism well, at least not outright violently, Sofi did sense that there was
a line past which he may not be so amiable; it was a line she did not wish to
cross with a God.
So she shook her head in
the negative.
“I assume from what you
said before that you have fixed this problem and that our new bodies are
properly defined.”
“Yes, I fixed that little
annoying hindrance,” replied the immortal. “However, it will take a year, in
Earth time, for the change to propagate; that’s actually about the same amount
of time it will take for your souls to assimilate. Don’t ask why it takes so
long because a year is just a tick of the geological clock.”
“It’s almost as if you
perfectly planned the entire thing,” she muttered.
He shrugged in an
unconcerned manner, but his eyes held a bit of mischief, “What makes you think
I didn’t?”
Even though he said it in a
playful tone that question stopped the Kyuubi dead in her tracks, and her mind
began to race with the possible implications of such a statement. Though before
she could fully develop her conspiracy theory the Ancient’s voice cut through
her musings.
“You worry too much,” he
said coolly. “Do you really think I would purposely burn away a year’s worth of
training on purpose?”
The Kyuubi nodded
hesitantly, still reluctant to give up her theory, but instead of continuing
with her previous train of though decided to ask whether her and Naruto’s
supremacies would still work on Ningenkai.
“They should, I set it up
that way,” he replied calmly. “Though, I did not finalize my decision, so when
I take you and Naruto down there the dimension will ask me for a confirmation. At
which time I will make any necessary adjustments; this is done to simply make
sure that I am not overlooking some important aspect.”
“Is it that hard to go back
and fix it later?” wondered Sofi.
“It’s more tedious and
bothersome than anything else.”
“So you are just lazy,” the
fox woman said satirically.
“I prefer to call it:
energy efficient.” She rolled her eyes, he laughed.
Before the immortal could
say anything further a new voice interrupted, “If you are done chatting up my
mate could you please teach me this ‘Flicker’ technique.”
Yashka turned around to
come face-to-face with a scruffy Naruto. The blond’s clothes were torn, there
were a couple of leaves in his hair, and splotches of dirt all over his body.
“What’d you do, mud wrestle
a kangaroo?” asked Yashka.
The blond resisted the urge
to face-fault; it was very difficult, “No, I went through that dimension-long
obstacle course you set up to test my speed.”
“Oh right,” said the
Ancient in faked sad voice. “But did you see a kangaroo while you were running
around? I lost track of my pet a while ago and I was hoping you might help me.”
Now, Naruto knew that the
Ancient liked to pull this kind of insane and completely retarded line of
questioning to get under his skin just so he could laugh at his victim’s
reactions. Still, knowing and being able to keep his cool after spending the
better part of twelve hours running through an obstacle course were two
different things.
“I didn’t see your goddamn
kangaroo,” yelled Naruto. “And if I had I would have eaten it for lunch!”
“Now, now, no need to yell,
I don’t have hearing problems,” replied Yashka in a completely calm tone. “By
the way, it would have been very cruel if you had eaten my poor little kangaroo
for lunch; very cruel indeed,” he added in a sorrowful voice.
The teenager’s hands
trembled wanting nothing more than to strangle his teacher so that he would
shut up. However, he took a deep breath and asked his teacher one more time to
teach him the new technique. Yashka chuckled, much to the displeasure of his
student, before going through the explanations and examples of one of his
favorite techniques.
A month passed quickly,
really quickly. Before either Naruto or Kyuubi knew it the Ancient was checking
their soul assimilation and telling them that they would be taking a short trip
down to the human world before returning to the training dimension.
It was strange, Naruto
thought, a whole year had passed in Konoha, but he had only aged a month. Also,
in the next six months before he had to return to Konoha he would age by a year
and “catch up” as the Ancient put it on the year spent in the Ancient’s house. It
was confusing, not to mention headache-inducing, so he focused on the fact that
he would be a couple months over seventeen when they got back to Konoha. This
would also effectively “move” his birthday back a couple months, so that it
would now be in the spring; April if his calculations were right. Yes, very
strange indeed.
Their stay on Ningenkai
took at most an hour. Yashka had teleported them to a very weird place. It was
a stadium that had been almost completely consumed by vegetation, just like all
the other buildings and structures around it. Naruto was sure that it had been
a human town at some point, but it was completely abandoned now. The Ancient
muttered something about them being on the other side of the planet, but didn’t
say anything further.
After, “all the quirks were
figured out,” as Yashka said the group went back to the training dimension and
the more-or-less usual routine started up again. For the next four months
Naruto and the Kyuubi trained in taijutsu, ninjutsu, genjutsu, kenjutsu, and
the combination thereof without much of anything interesting happening. Except
one time, when the Ancient took the Kyuubi away for an entire day.
They had teleported away
from the training dimension early that morning and appeared in a black and
white room; the background was black and the foreground was white. However, as
soon as the Ancient started moving more colors were added, like several shades
of blue, then gray, and soon it started looking more and more like a control
room of sorts.
“This is the astral space
where World rules and definitions are held,” explained the Ancient. “Tread
lightly and don’t touch anything, but don’t worry you can’t fall off the edge
or anything silly like that.”
Yashka tapped a couple
keys, pressed several button, and typed something in a foreign language on a
holographic screen, all the while making small talk with the fox lady.
“You've already awakened
your second Supremacy,” commented the Ancient in an impressed tone.
The Kyuubi nodded, “It's
pretty easy when you which elements they are, and since I had water before, I
went straight for learning this one. I’ll need a couple more days to get
reacquainted with it, and then move on to mixing.”
Yashka grinned, “Ahead of
the curve as always, but that is to be expected from the Fox Prodigy.”
She waved off his praises,
“Oh please, I worked just as hard as everyone else to be the number one fighter
in my family.”
“Still you were number one
not some other fox, so I guess that intellect helped.”
“Oh sure, everyone
conveniently forgets that muscles have to trained, endurance has to trained,
flexibility has to be trained, any physical aspect has to be trained,” she
replied perturbed. “What are we doing here anyway? Rather what am I doing
here?”
“You are needed in order
for you and Naruto to be able to summon.”
“I’m going to learn to
summon the toads?” the nine-tailed fox that had put a scar over the boss toad’s
eye was quite skeptic. “Somehow I don’t think they’ll accept me.”
“No, I’m going to make it
so that you two can summon foxes,” replied the Ancient as he made a 3D image
of, what the Kyuubi assumed to be Ningenkai, appear in the middle of the room.
“I’ve never heard of a fox
summoning contract.”
“There isn’t one, but I’ll
make you one,” said Yashka.
“You can do that?”
“Yes, sort of, not in the
traditional way humans do it, but yes,” after that reply the immortal was
forced to elaborate. “Foxes don’t exist as a summoning animal right now, but
that can be changed if you were to agree.”
“Why me?” wondered the
Kyuubi. “It’s not like I have magical governing powers over all the foxes on
Ningenkai.”
“Maybe not that you are
aware of, but since you’ve come to Ningenkai from Makai you have been the
strongest fox in the human world,” explain Yashka. “By default, it’s the
strongest fox that is the ‘leader’ of the foxes and the one that can make such
decision for the entire species.”
“What ever happened to
intelligence?” she asked disdainfully.
Yashka smirked sadly and
nodded in understanding, “I needed a default rule; power is the over all best
idea.”
“Sure, whatever, I agree,”
replied the Kyuubi taking this new discovery in stride.
“Good, then if you would
could you stand inside that sphere?” the fox lady complied. “That sphere is an
abstraction of the human world. Using that abstraction and some of your blood,
I will construct a blood-bind that will allow you and anyone you bestow a
special seal on to summon foxes.”
“That’s always bothered me,
where are these huge building-high summons on Ningenkai?” asked the Kyuubi. “I’ve
never seen them anywhere around the Shinobi World.”
“They are on another
continent, which is currently not occupied by humans at all.”
“And they all live on this
continent in peace?” wondered the Kyuubi incredulously.
“They live there like the
clans live in Makai,” replied Yashka to which the fox lady nodded in
understanding.
The procedure was over so
quickly the Kyuubi hadn’t even realized that it had started. A couple lasers
hit her, then the Ancient took a painless blood sample, and before she knew it
the sphere had disappeared and the immortal tossed her a scroll about the
summoning seal. The scroll explained in detail how to put it on a person and
said that if the foxes refused the summoner that the seal wouldn’t set.
“So this is where you go
when you say you have business?” inquired the Kyuubi. “Your real business, I
mean, not just picking up girls.”
“No, I don’t really go to
this place much,” replied Yashka.
“Sometimes I think that the
worlds you create are just a big playground you make for yourself.”
The immortal shrugged,
“Maybe. I am young.”
“Only a billion years old,”
said the fox sardonically.
Yashka laughed, “Not even a
million.”
That definitely caught the
Kyuubi’s attention, “Wait, seriously? You’re not even a million years old?”
The Ancient chuckled,
“Nope. I’m not even half a million years old.”
Kyuubi’s train of thought
completely crashed at that wall. It was theoretically impossible that the
Ancient wasn’t even half a million years old. Suddenly an idea struck her,
“You’re counting your age from the heavily slowed time of your home dimension,”
she deduced.
“Well, that’s part of it,”
replied the Ancient as he tilted his head back and seemed to consider
something. “I’ll tell you a secret, but you have to swear to not tell anyone,
even your mate.”
Kyuubi noticed the
seemingly playful look on the Ancient’s face and was about to respond in kind,
but then she noticed the deep undercurrent of extreme seriousness. She thought
about for a minute before nodding positively.
“Remember, not a word to
anyone,” warned the Ancient. “I will know if you break your promise and you
will learn the hard way that there are much worse things in this world than
death.”
Kyuubi steeled her resolved
and agreed.
“Alright; first a question:
how old do you think this world is?” asked Yashka. “Assume all the dimensions
in it were created at the same time.”
“It has to be at least 100
thousand years old,” reasoned the fox. “Makai has ruins that date back past
that, but maybe you skewed the numbers somehow.”
Yashka nodded, pleasantly
surprised by the Kyuubi’s intuition, but a small mischievous smile played on
his lips. As he uttered his next words, the Kyuubi felt her confidence for
anything she held as historical fact fall apart. “It is not even half that; the
world is a little over 43 thousand years old.”
“But how? That’s impossible
someone would have noticed,” she tried to reason.
Yashka shook his head and
continued in a mocking tone, “Noticed? Noticed what? There is no way to notice
something that is written into your brain as the absolute truth.” He pulled up
a screen containing a long list of some sort. “These are all the absolute
truths of Makai. No mortal can oppose anything that is written on this list.”
Kyuubi managed to make out
the carbon dating to a famous temple as 112 thousand years and felt cold chills
run all the way down her body.
“This is my eighth world,”
explained the Ancient. “I have not reached an age where I worry about how perfect
my worlds are. I am merely playing around and trying out new things with each
consecutive world. While I do try to keep my worlds orderly that is not at the
top of my priorities list.”
“What are we to you?” asked
the Kyuubi, internally scared to death of what the answer would be.
“You and Naruto?” Yashka
studied her for moment before answering, “Players in this world?”
“Players to what end?” she
asked suspiciously.
“Not an end that will get
you killed before your time,” reassured the immortal.
“How do I know I can trust
you?”
“You don’t know,” was the
tired reply. “You simply have my word and I have not lied to you in the past.”
Kyuubi was not satisfied
with that answer, “Then you really did pick Naruto for his potential?”
“Yes, he has a great
potential.”
“Great potential to be used
as a means to accomplish some plan of yours?” it was more a statement that a
question. The Ancient did not respond, so the Kyuubi continued to press. “And
what is this plan of yours going to do exactly, could you be so kind as to at
least tell me that?”
“Naruto will be helping me
correct a flaw that I made when I created this world,” was the simply yet very
vague reply. “You have already surmised that there would be some sort of fee
for my training and you are right.”
The fox lady was fuming,
the Ancient was purposely giving vague responses and somehow this whole
conversation had an ominous feeling about it; she did not like it one bit. “If
not death, then what exactly is Naruto going to pay with?”
Yashka decided to cut this conversation short, “You want to know too many
things. Need I remind you that you are still under oath; you will not repeat
any of this to anyone, especially Naruto.” The Kyuubi snarled. “Or I could wipe
your memory of these events? It is your choice.”
“I’ll keep my mouth shut,” she replied begrudgingly through a half snarl.
Yashka accepted her oath silently.
Once that was done they returned to the training dimension and the Kyuubi
put the seal on Naruto and he summoned a very cute white fox that instantly took
a liking to him.
After their conversation the Kyuubi never again felt fully comfortable
around the Ancient. Naruto noticed this, but as neither side would provide an
explanation he was forced to leave it alone. The only thing Naruto ever got out
of his mate was a snarled out muttering that the Ancient held more secrets
there were trees in a forest.
Yashka did not worry too much. After all, memories could be wiped and
animosity could be fixed by the need to act before the need to think.
As previously noted, it is really hard to tell the passing of time if your
surroundings don’t change from day to day. This is why Naruto is forced to
bring the subject of time yet again at the breakfast table.
“We have 1 months, 29 days, 6 hours, and 43 minutes before you are due back
in Konoha,” replied the Ancient. “In this dimension that translates into 3
months, 28 days, 13 hours, and 26 minutes.”
“You keep track down to the minutes?” asked Naruto deadpanned.
“Yeah, I like to be prompt,” replied Yashka.
“You’re insane,” muttered the blond.
“Thank you, I like being unique,” the immortal blatantly ignored the next
comment about it not being a compliment. “On the note of time, we are moving
out in about a week.”
“And going where?” wondered Sofi.
“To visit your kin in the human world.”
“My kin?” wondered the Kyuubi. “I do not remember having any kits.”
“A great uncle of yours was sent down to Ningenkai before you were born,”
explained the Ancient. “His passing is what prompted your own transportation to
that world.”
“Why are we going to meet them?” asked the teenager.
“They will be the Kyuubi’s cover story for when she goes to Konoha,” said
Yashka. “Plus, I’m going to start giving you a crash course on the Void World,
which you can only access in the human world.”
“Void World?” inquired Naruto.
“It is what I use to teleport us,” answered Yashka. “It is also what I
sometimes use to cheat with Flicker.”
“What does it do exactly?”
“It creates a dimension in Void Space, which is basically free space
anywhere close to large dimensions. It’s a small dimension in which you can
control time, space, and orientation dilation. The easiest thing to do though
is to make a overlay of your current battlefield and use time dilation.”
“So that I can get across, say, a stadium in a millisecond?” asked Naruto
joyfully.
“Yes,” replied the Ancient and watched as his student’s grin spread across
his entire face. “However, before you start getting crazy illusions of
grandeur, it is a very expensive technique. A simple overlay without time dilation
and one that you can only use once would cost you ten percent of your chakra.”
The former jinchuuriki’s eyes widened, “Ten percent?”
“That’s right, you can’t just constantly use the Void through out the entire
battle,” said the immortal. “It’s more of a finishing move type of jutsu, or
you use it to get behind your opponent.”
“What did you mean by ‘use once?’” inquired the Kyuubi.
“What I mean is that it disappears as soon as its creator leaves it.
Reusable Voids take more chakra, like 30 percent, and have a five second
counter to stay open without the presence of its creator. Well, it’s 30 percent
plus a small fee of about 0.3 percent for each entrance.”
“Time dilation would then really drain my chakra?” asked Naruto.
“Oh yes, each doubling would cost you about ten percent,” replied Yashka.
Naruto was perplexed, “So how do you do it?”
“I use Creation,” was the simple reply. “It effectively cuts those figures
by 100, or gets rid of them altogether.”
“Lucky bastard.”
The Ancient shrugged, “It’s part of the job description.”
“Hold on a moment, you said the Void dimension disappears as soon as its
creators leaves it,” analyzed Kyuubi to which the Ancient nodded. “How long
does its creator have to get into it before it disappears? On that note, how
does one get hop dimensions?”
Yashka nodded in approval, “Good question. The way the Void is set up in
this World is that the Void’s creator gets transported into it as soon as it is
created.”
“Then how does one get out?” wondered Naruto.
“You set through the exit portal,” answered Yashka as if it was the most
obvious thing in the world. “Which you define either during creation or while
you are inside the dimension.”
“I’m guessing you’ll teach us how to create these dimension and then enter
them and show us the ropes,” reasoned the blond.
“No,” was the curt reply, which earned him two very confused looks. “It’s
actually very hard find a Void dimension in all of Void Space; almost
impossible actually. If all three of us created a Void dimension that would
overlay this house, we wouldn’t all get teleported to the same Void dimension,
we would all get our separate dimensions.
This is because the overlay is simply an abstraction of a Void dimension. An
overlay defines size, shape, terrain, and obstacles. Location is not defined it
is randomly selected in an area of Void Space that can accommodate the
definitions you ask for. Plus, if you think about it, two dimensions cannot
exist in the same space. Hence an overlay cannot physically be in the same
space as the human world, the demon world, or the angel world.”
It turned out that Kyuubi’s kin were even further north than the Snow
Country and quite far from the Shinobi World; needless to say it was extremely
cold there. The Kyuubi quickly transformed into her more furry form and pulled
her white, furry, leather coat closed while hiding her hands into its soft
pockets. She and Naruto were finally forced to channel chakra to their
extremities to keep warm.
Though the cold didn’t seem to bother Naruto too much, but that was probably
because he was too preoccupies with playing with his tails. The Ancient had
placed a seal on Naruto that would keep his hybrid demonic body looking human
for five years. Said seal was “paused” as the Ancient put it his some sort of
backdoor password. So now the blond was busy examining and playing with his
newly discovered physical aspects.
“Why’d you have to place the seal on my back?” asked the blond once again in
a whiny voice. "On that note, doesn't that also mean that my body is being
held back by the seal?"
The Ancient was quickly getting annoyed of both of those questions, “So that
you wouldn’t unseal it on your own or even worse screw it up in such a way that
you would be physically deformed for life. I thought we've gone over this
enough times, the seal just represses your ability to transform everything else
stays the same.”
“I guess when you put it like that,” drawled Naruto.
“Don’t want you looking like a hippo,” commented the Kyuubi.
“Would you leave me if I turned into a hippo?” wondered the teenager.
“Yes, I would,” said the fox lady deadpanned.
Naruto face fell into a deep frown, “That’s so cruel.”
Sofi smiled, “I’m kidding; you’re so easy to tease,” she quickly looped her
arm around his and pushed her body right along his.
“You can continue this in the bedroom,” Yashka didn’t even bat an eye. “We
are approaching the town.”
The pair ignored his first comment, “I don’t see why we couldn’t have
teleported inside the town.”
“That would cause quite a commotion,” was the steady reply.
“But you don’t care about commotions,” Naruto pointed out. “I think you just
did it because you like to make us suffer.”
“I like a lot of things,” he paused for a moment. “Having sex with a
two-tail is especially fun.”
Naruto quickly shook his head as a dozen scenarios flooded his head, “You
know what, I really don’t want to know.” The Ancient threw his head back and
laughed, no doubt clearly amused by how perverted his student’s thoughts were.
"I do wish you'd have let these bodies transform into full demonic
forms," said the fox lady longingly.
"You miss being of skyscraper height?" coyly remarked the Ancient.
"Sorry, no can do, but I am able to grant you as much of a half-demon form
as your kin have."
Once they got to the city, it turned out that introductions were unnecessary
as half-demon fox humans, or the Kitsuma as they called themselves, could tell
just who the Kyuubi was by feeling her chakra. The gate guards and the general
populace were all but bowing to her and Naruto, while the head of the town had
offered up her room to the visiting couple. Kyuubi, being royalty, was used to
such treatment. Naruto found it to be strange and somewhat unnerving.
Kyuubi handled the formalities like refusing the town leader’s own room and
instead requesting a guest room, as well as requesting a meal, and maybe some
entertainment. Naruto, self-consciously, though that they were asking for too
much and that the town head, who had introduced herself as Anzu, would throw
them out soon. Sofi assured him that nothing like that would happen, especially
with the Ancient present, and that instead the town would probably throw them a
banquet.
The Ancient was surprisingly quiet throughout all this, almost fading into
the shadows; whether that was intentional or not, no one knew. Though, when
offered a place to stay he had politely refused stating that he had business to
attend to later on and would not be staying for the night.
Naruto and Sofi has learned long ago that it was pointless to ask the
Ancient what business he had to attend to and for how long he would be gone. If
was going to share with them what he had done he would do so. Though, the first
time he had done so they found out that he went to the Cloud Country to pick up
three girls to have fun with in a motel. The dark-haired man had gotten quite a
laugh out of their reaction. Of course this wasn’t always the case, he would
sometimes come back muttering angrily; the few times that they picked out what
he said it something about war and instability and stupid bastards.
True to his word, Yashka left about halfway through the banquet, but not
before whispering to Naruto that they were welcome stay here until he got back.
As if Naruto and the Kyuubi had somewhere else to go. The immortal showed up a
couple days later and dragged Naruto out of the nice warm house to train in the
freezing cold.
They walked quite a ways from the Kitsuma’s town during which time Naruto
noticed that the Ancient never seemed to be affected by the elements. Voicing
his thoughts had provided him quite a simple answer that Yashka was at one with
nature and that such things as weather conditions simply didn’t concern him.
Yashka suddenly stopped and used a bit of wind to blow away the snow on the
ground. “Do you know what we are standing on?” he asked the teenager.
Naruto looked down and saw white ground that vaguely resembled ice, but
didn’t have the slippery factor of ice; he shook his head.
“We are standing on a glacier,” was the calm reply; Yashka had not expected
Naruto to know. “It is basically a giant slab of ice.”
“I know what a glacier is,” replied the blond before the Ancient could go
into a full lecture.
“I want you to break off a chunk as big as a cottage,” instructed the
immortal. “No fire jutsus, you can’t use raw chakra to cut it, nor can you use
your swords. This has to be done through straight manipulation of the element.”
“Ice is not an element.”
“Ice is said to be created when Suiton affinity meets Fuiton affinity, but
for you ice is like metal.”
Naruto’s eyebrows rose at that, “Ice is the extension of the Suiton
Supremacy?”
“No. It is an ability provided by the final stage of the Suiton Supremacy.”
“So am I to understand that I can manipulate ice, but not create it?”
wondered Naruto.
“No, I’m pretty sure you will be able to create it,” replied Yashka.
“However, I think the initial exercises should be in manipulation rather than
creation.”
“How would I go about creating ice?”
“Same way you create water,” was the nonchalant reply.
“But you said that a Fuiton affinity is needed in order to create ice.”
Yashka nodded, “Yes, and you had such an affinity before gaining your new
body. Don’t think that everything has completely changed with your new body,
your wind affinity was quite strong and bits of it carried over. However, even
if you didn’t have it Suiton Supremacy is designed in such a way that the
Fuiton aspect is supplemented for the user. What this means for you is that it
will be even easier to create ice.”
“Oh yeah, that reminds me, something that’s been bothering for a while now,”
the Ancient nodded for him to continue. “If the human body is 70 percent water,
why can't I control it and make someone blow up?”
Yashka smiled, “And on that note why can’t you make it freeze? Remember when
we had the talk about not being able to make an ocean disappear or make the
Earth split in half,” Naruto nodded. “Same basic principal, the World
Preservers are constantly in effect. Being able to make humans blow up, could
very well lead to the destruction of the entire species, so that power is taken
away.”
“More Supremacy limitations,” said Naruto.
“Everything has a glass ceiling.”
“Oh yes, the inevitable glass ceiling,” sarcastically replied the blond.
“That I can look through and see that which I wish I could get to.”
The immortal merely shrugged in a ‘that’s how it is and I can’t do anything
about it’ way before telling Naruto once again to perform his given task. The
blond didn’t manage to do it that day, or the day after, or the day after that.
On the fourth day he finally found out that the Ancient was actually trying to
rush the Suiton Supremacy by having it interact with the native environment of
the final stage; the supremacy wasn’t being very obedient.
“I’m giving you two a vacation until we are due back in Konoha,” suddenly
said Yashka. “You can choose to go anywhere you want.” He then tossed Naruto a
thin electronic device. “That will teleport you to any major location on this
world and it can teleport you to the training dimension; sorry but my house is out
of bounds.”
“Thank you.”
The immortal nodded in acknowledgement, “I’ll come back for you in about six
weeks and we’ll go back to Konoha.”
“Do we have to?” asked Naruto in a slightly whiny tone.
“Yes,” was the straightforward answer. “I did give my word and you still
have some unfinished business there.”
Naruto suddenly looked hesitant, “You know, destroying Konoha isn’t at the
top of my priorities anymore.”
“You would rather leave them alive to hunt you and your mate?” countered the
Ancient.
“They wouldn’t…” he trailed off not sure of this himself.
“Really? They wouldn’t?”
“They wouldn’t find us here,” improvised the blond.
“You are sure? You would bet your life, your mate’s life, and the life of
the people here?” The Ancient maneuvered him into an ultimatum. “If your
resolve is absolute then I will let you stay here, but if you have even one
sliver of doubt you should eliminate it.”
Naruto knew his teacher was right. There would always be a possibility that
Konoha shinobi would find him here. They would live in fear, in constant
paranoia, that someone would come for them.
“Fearing every single stranger, avoiding conversations about your past,
constantly watching and checking that your walls don’t have ears, is that the
kind of life you want for your family?” asked Yashka. He paused to allow the
blond to consider it and waited for the look of the answer he was looking for.
“I know what your answer is and your reasoning behind it that is why I will be
back in six weeks to take you to your place of unfinished business.”
Naruto solemnly nodded and muttered out, “Ok, I’ll be ready to go in six
weeks.” After all, the Ancient was right his biggest reason for leaving Konoha
was for freedom. What kind of freedom would he have if he was constantly on the
run? Also, he wasn’t alone anymore, he had to worry for Sofi and the family he
would have in the future.
Meanwhile the Ancient had teleported away to a very noisy place. Well, more
like there was one person yelling and the other was cowering; the immortal
found it entertaining as he stayed invisible waiting for the right time to
reveal himself.
“Where the hell is he Jiraiya?” screamed the Godaime Hokage.
The toad hermit wanted to just be able to disappear. He didn’t know where the
hell the Ancient was. All he had to maybe curb his teammate’s anger was the
Ancient’s word that Naruto would be back to Konoha. This, of course, would
prove problematic since it was supposed to have him that was training the
jinchuuriki.
He decided to just bite the bullet and tell her the truth. “I left him in
the Ancient’s care.”
Tsunade paused in her tirade to consider the pervert’s response. “The
Ancient?”
“Yes, he gave me his word that he would bring Naruto back to Konoha within
three years.”
“You wouldn’t happen to have that in writing, would you?” she asked in a
suspiciously calm tone.
Jiraiya paled; he did not have it in writing. He was dead, he was sure of
it. Tsunade would kill him for something he had absolutely no control over.
However, before anything could happen, a soft voice from opposite side of the
room interjected.
“You wouldn’t happen to be doubting my word, would you?”
The pair snapped their heads in the direction of the voice to find a man
dressed in all white standing there in a regal manner with a slightly amused
look on his face. The worst part of it was the two sannin still couldn’t sense
this guy’s presence.
“My, my, Hime-Tsu you haven’t aged much since I last you,” he complimented.
“Your breasts did get larger I think.”
The Hokage gritted her teeth together resisting the urge to punch him.
“You’re still a flirt, I see.”
He shook his head from side to side considering it, “Guilty as charged,” he
said with a smirk, which faded as he noticed the other person in room groveling
at his feet.
“Please, tell her that you will have Naruto back here soon and that it
wasn’t my fault that you took him in the first place.”
“If by not your fault you mean that you would never have been able to bring
out Naruto’s full potential, then yes, it is not your fault that you would have
been peeking at girls more than training him.” This had the desired response of
Jiraiya trying to stutter out a responses and Tsunade getting angry and
punching him out of the office; again Yashka found this amusing.
“I hope that you will excuse any rudeness on my part,” Tsunade bowed
lightly. “I was expecting to have Naruto back two and a half years after he
left.”
Yashka waved her off with a small smile that showed that he was a lot more
amused than insulted. “I was told by the man you ejected from your office that
Naruto had to be back in Konoha in three years. As such, I have arranged that
he will be back in six week, if that is fine with you?”
The Godaime could not bring herself to object. After all, this was the
creator of the world standing in front of her.
“Good,” the Ancient nodded and made to leave.
“Wait!” the man halted and waited for her question. “If you don’t mind me
asking, why did you train Naruto?”
“I don’t mind,” was the tranquil reply. “Naruto peaked my interest.”
“Surely it was more complicated than that?”
The tranquil voice continued, though now there a hint of finality in it,
“Even if that were the case, I would not be discussing such things with you.”
He smiled lightly to show that he didn’t mean harm. “I will take my leave now
Hime-Tsu. Oh yes, please enter Naruto in the next Chuunin Exam, I believe he
will make it in time. Even if there is no team available I will insist that he
participate.”
With that he disappeared and Tsunade released a breath she didn’t know she
was holding and plopped down in her chair. It was lot of digest all at once.
The Ancient training Naruto meant that Naruto had a potential higher than the
Yondaime; that was a scary thought.
If the Ancient were to insist that someone participate in something it means
that that person would participate, even if he is a one-man team, or else God
got angry at you. She, along with Jiraiya and Orochimaru, had witnessed what
happened when someone angered the Ancient. It was after that battle, or maybe
she should call it a slaughter since the Ancient’s clothes didn’t even get
damaged, that he had introduced himself to the three of them and nicknamed
Tsunade ‘Hime-Tsu.’
He had wiped out two battalions, 12 shinobi each, in under a minute; all of
them were jounin. It was an ambush meant for her team, the Ancient just
happened to be resting in that particular place; they attacked him and he
retaliated. The ease with which it was done, the speed, and the fact that the
man wasn’t even slightly winded afterwards showed the sannin just how dangerous
he was; Tsunade still shivered when she thought of that incident.
“You believe me now?” asked a familiar voice from the window. The Godaime
nodded. “He challenged me to a duel to see who would be Naruto’s teacher; the
first thought in my head was the slaughter.”
Tsunade nodded again, and relayed the conversation she had with the Ancient
after Jiraiya had left.
“Remember those tattoos we saw on Naruto’s body?” the Hokage nodded. “My
theory is that the Ancient gave him those tattoos and that during that trip
when I would leave him alone to train the Rasengan that was when he first met
the Ancient.”
“What do you think those tattoos do?”
“Hyuuga Neji’s report about Sasuke’s rescue mission stated that Naruto had brought
down the chakra-stealing earth dome by applying a minimal amount of charka at
the dome’s weakest point,” explained the hermit. “I think those tattoos give
him an innate control over Doton.”
“You think they are seals that force a Doton affinity?”
Jiraiya shrugged, “Maybe not force, but at least heighten it.”
Tsunade was skeptical, “That’s a little far fetched that a seal would be
able to do that.”
“Far fetched for whom, us?” countered Jiraiya. “Yes, for us it might seem
far fetched, but what about Him? Do you think the Ancient has such boundaries
as affinities? Maybe he can even give Naruto an affinity in all the elements.”
“Like the Rin’negan?” questioned Tsunade.
“It is a bloodline,” replied Jiraiya feverishly. “What would stop the
Ancient from giving out bloodlines? I mean he is all-powerful.”
The Godaime shook her head, “Now you are just talking crazy Jiraiya. At that
rate the Ancient could pick up any student and make him as powerful as he
wants.”
Jiraiya frowned for a moment he improvised, “Maybe he needs a certain body
type for these alterations to be possible.”
“No, Jiraiya, stop,” calmly replied Tsunade. “This is God you are talking
about he can create people, he doesn’t need to search for specific body types.
So don’t, just drop this, Naruto will be here in six weeks and we will get our
answers then.”
Yashka had disappeared, but only from view he hadn’t teleported away. The
talk between Jiraiya and Tsunade had been interesting. He found it funny that
Jiraiya was pretty close to the truth in the beginning and then completely
drifted into madness at the end.
This Rin’negan did seem interesting though, affinity in all elements if the
hermit was spot-on with his definition. He would have to ask Zeph about this he
was the one with thorough knowledge of the Shinobi World.
‘That’s right, Pein in the Akatsuki,’ Yashka suddenly remembered. ‘I
will need a DNA sample; if this is what I think it is.’
Now that he had determined his destination, he teleported away.
Yashka calmly sat down on the balcony railing of the fifth floor of his
castle putting his right foot on it and leaning his back against a short column
on top of which sat a now empty flower pot. He swirled the blood-red wine in
its glass as he looked out over his domain.
A figure materialize out of nowhere in the doorway and stepped closed to
Yashka.
“Pein,” Yashka started off.
“Is a descendant of yours,” finished the man as he grew out his hair back to
its usual length reaching the small of his back and changed its color back to
silver. “The special gene that would normally be dormant in mortals is what is
giving him his bloodline.”
“Radiation will do that,” Yashka sighed. “How many generations was it,
three? Three generations of humans living on radioactive lands, eating
radioactive crops and animals, and we were actually surprised that they
acquired ninjutsu.”
“The Sage of Six Paths was also a Rin’negan user,” remarked Zeph. “The
radioactivity brought the ‘Ancient gene’ out of its dormancy and the fact that
he chose Creation only made it that much easier to give everyone else he knew
either a bloodline or insanely powerful abilities.”
“The first and last person to choose Creation over Destruction,” scoffed the
immortal. “It’s ironic, they choose the element that is not only sealed away,
but also the one that is completely useless except in one kind of situation.”
“It is a subconscious choice,” endorsed Zeph, “and they don’t know the finer
workings and differences between Creation and Destruction.”
The Ancient smirked, “They don’t know that Creation is more powerful;
Creation breeds Destruction because you can create things are destroys and
Destruction only destroys. Not to mention the fact that they only gain a slight
increase in power because even I don’t have access to the element of
Destruction.”
Yashka and Zeph shared a
mocking laugh before both settled on observing the never-changing scenery.
After a long silence, the
Ancient brought up a topic that he had yet to mention to his assistant, “By the
way, I told her the real age of this world.”
“How did she take it?”
wondered the assistant.
“Not too bad.”
“Does she suspect
anything?” asked Zeph in a somber voice.
Yashka shook his head and
took a sip of wine, “Not enough that it would warrant intervention, so relax.”
“You should have erased her
memory,” insisted Zeph.
The Ancient waved him off,
“The final act is a chain reaction, the entire scope of which only you and I
see. To the inhabitants it will look like a bunch of coincidental events that
they will not even pay attention to until it is too late; and there won’t be
any retrospect.”
Zeph dropped the argument
choosing to relax instead, and the Ancient continued swirling his wine
analogizing the small action needed to swirl the liquid to the small action
needed to swirl the world.
A/N:
This chapter feels
rushed... / Oh well.
Disclaimer: I am not religious, I do not
support the theory of Creation, nor do I believe that the artifacts and bones
archaeologists find were put there by a higher entity. However, the last two
work very well in this story and I do not mind setting aside my personal
beliefs for the sake of the story.
This chapter does mark the
end of the second arc. The next arc will be set in Konoha with flashbacks to
details of techniques (because I firmly believe that any marginally not
retarded person would not explain his/her technique to his/her opponent). I
can't see the 3rd arc spanning more than 10 chapters.
Chapter 16: Naruto comes
back to Konoha; and all the chaos that that brings. The Ancient comes along to
torment the foolish mortals for his own personal pleasure.