The Naruto concept is owned by Masashi Kishimoto. This story, and any
original characters inside, are mine. Don’t take them. You know the drill.
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Reflection
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The steam rose up from the cup and Naruto watched it quietly. He thought
it was interesting how the slightest change in pace, the minutest movement or
exhale or inhale or anything could so drastically change the path that the
steam took. It eddied and swirled, following invisible paths, pushed by
invisible forces. Naruto closed his eyes, raised the cup, and sipped slowly.
“Ah…” he murmured to himself, secure in the warmth of the tea. He had
been looking forward to this all day. Setting the mug back on the table, he
began watching the steam rise again.
A door swished open across the room, and the steam disappeared. Carefully,
Naruto raised his eyes as a brace of kunai flopped on the chair. Kutsu
followed, except on the floor. Naruto’s view of his student was blocked by the
table, but he could tell what the child was doing.
“I am too tired,” Kutsu stated, “to do anything. Even die.”
Naruto’s eyes narrowed. “You’re on the floor.” He stated,
matter-of-fact.
A sigh originated from somewhere down there. “Indeed I am.”
Naruto blinked in exasperation. He took another sip from his tea, hoping
to glean some sort of calming effect from the warmth and goodness. It almost
worked. “Are you clean?” he asked, like it was the most natural thing in the
world to be doing.
Another sigh, then some rustling. “Um….Well, I’m kinda sweaty. And I
think I’m bleeding. And there’s probably some mud on me, but I’m too stiff to
check very much. And –“
Naruto cut him off with a loud slurp. Slurping brought out the flavour
in ramen, so maybe it would work with tea. “So you are, in fact, dirty.”
“Yeah.”
The cup slammed on the table with a sharp rap, echoing briefly through
the small apartment. “Since you’re already down there, I hope you can tell me. Is
the floor, by any chance, as dirty as you are?”
There was a brief pause. “Um…Hang on…ow…” While he waited, Naruto took
more sips. “Yes.”
Naruto blinked. If he looked carefully, he could see the tea particles
swirling around in the green tinted water. “Yes, what?”
“Yes, the floor is as dirty as I am.”
Tilting his head back, Naruto waited for the last drops of tea to slide
into his mouth before he reached for the pot. “I see,” he stated. The boiling water splashed into the
tea mug, looking like it was slightly melon flavoured, though it wasn’t. “Was
it like that before you flopped down there?” Naruto’s voice was beginning to
rise, betraying his irritation.
“Um…I really don’t know. The
rest of it looks pretty clean, though…I’m guessing it wasn’t.”
Naruto’s eyebrow twitched,
although Kutsu couldn’t see it. Tea wasn’t going to help relax Naruto now, he
knew it. “The floor was clean because I washed it.”
“It looks good.”
“It did. It doesn’t anymore.
Do you know why?”
“Um…because there’s a big
dirty spot in the middle of it now?”
Naruto nodded. Kutsu couldn’t
see that either, but the kid guessed it was happening. Naruto gave his mug a
push, sliding it off the end of the table. A moment’s silence, then a sharp
crack and a splash were almost, but not quite, drowned out by the shout of pain
emanating from somewhere in the vicinity of the floor.
“I spent almost an hour getting
this apartment nice and clean. Almost an hour. And then I sat down to a nice
relaxing pot of tea because dammit, I deserve it after almost an hour of
cleaning, and then you come in. And you make it dirty again.”
“oww….”
“And now, on top of the dirty floor,
I’m out of tea.”
“I don’t really think you can
blame that on me.” Kutsu protested plaintively, rubbing the bump on his
forehead. “And it was hot, too. It hurt.”
Naruto stood up and stalked
over to the sink. Retrieving a mostly clean dishrag from the counter, he
flipped it over his shoulder and smiled on the inside when it flopped onto
Kutsu’s face.
“Oh god, this smells nasty…”
Kutsu sat up and pulled the rag off his face. “It’s like artificial lemon and
alcohol mixed into one. What have you been doing with this?”
Naruto walked past him, barely
deigning to acknowledge the boy’s presence. “It smells like cleaning solution.
You’re going to use it to clean the floor.”
Kutsu gaped at him. “I can’t!
I’m too tired, remember?” He flopped on the floor again to reinforce his point.
Naruto slid open the door to the bathroom, then turned, looking at Kutsu with a
critical eye.
“I wouldn’t flop on the floor
like that if I were you,” he said. “It just make more dirty parts for you to
scrub. And what you’re fighting is the pain barrier. Beat it to get stronger.”
Sullenly, Kutsu began
scrubbing the floor. “And what are you going to do while I slave away?” he
questioned. Naruto wagged a finger at him.
“I’m going to take a bath.
Less talk, more scrub. Cleaning solution is under the sink. It’s the yellow
bottle. Smells like artificial lemon and alcohol. I’d tell you to take a swig
if you feel like you need it, but you’re too young and the stuff is rank,
anyway.”
He ignored Kutsu’s incredulous
gaze and stripped and showered, shivering slightly as the cool water washed
over him. With a long exhale, he sank into the warm tub to the tips of his
earlobes. If he concentrated, he could hear Kutsu cleaning….
“Oh man… this stuff smells
nasty. How could you possibly drink this? Maybe if you hold your nose. That
blocks out taste, doesn’t it?” A pause, then a spit. Naruto smiled to himself.
“I don’t hear any scrubbing
out there,” he called.
“That’s because you’re old and
deaf.” was the irate reply.
Naruto sank further in the
tub, expelling air to raise his density. Warm water flowed around his hair,
loosening it from his customary spikes. When he surfaced, a layer of yellow
coated everything in his vision. He shook his head and sprayed water everybody,
but managed to get the hair out of his eyes.
He leaned back, resting his
head against the lip of the tub. Was this where his life was going? At
thirteen, he’d been so positive that he would be Hokage by now. That goal
seemed so far off, now.
He closed his eyes and began
to reflect. Sure, he wasn’t the Hokage. At least, he wasn’t yet. He still had
plans to change that. But right now, he had a more pressing engagement. He was
the leader of a genin team. And let’s be honest, that’s no mean feat. And
besides, it’s a requirement to being Hokage, in tradition if not in letter.
A knock sounded on the door.
“I finished cleaning the floor, and I put that dirty rag in the washer. I want
to take a bath when you’re done, so hurry up and finish whatever you’re doing
in there.”
Naruto submerged, then
surfaced again. “I’m almost done,” he called out. “Just give me a couple more
minutes, then you can spend all the time you like in here.” Running a hand
through his hair, he heaved himself out of the tub and snagged a towel from the
rack.
As he wrapped it around his
waist, he slid the door open and stepped out. Without a word, Kutsu darted in
and shut the door loudly, locking it. Naruto laughed. “I have better people to
peep on,” he said loudly.
“Go to hell.” Kutsu called
back, his voice muffled by layers of cloth being pulled over his face.
Naruto smiled and put another
pot of water on to boil. After he made the tea, he did some basic work while
drinking to while away the time. He set his cup down after what seemed like not
too long, and a yawn crept up on him. He blinked slowly, and yawned again.
“What time is it?” he mused
softly, clearing away the tea supplies. As he put the cups in the dishwasher,
he checked the clock on the wall. “11:42? No wonder I’m tired. Time for sleep,
I guess.”
He shuffled lazily over to the
bathroom, rapping on the door. “It’s time to come out, kid. Bedtime.” He waited
for a response.
Nothing. He rapped on the door
again.
Still nothing. What was going
on?
Naruto walked over to the
table, and picked up a kunai he had been sharpening. Sliding the blade between
the door and the jamb, he gave it a sharp twist and popped the lock. The door
opened slightly, and he stepped into the steamy bathroom. “Hey Kutsu, you
okay?”
He peered into the tub and was
torn between laughing and smiling. Kutsu had fallen asleep in the tub, sinking
down almost, but not quite to the point where his nostrils were submerged
underwater. Every time the kid exhaled, the air made little ripples in the
water. Naruto shook him, and Kutsu’s head drooped on to his shoulder. No
response.
Naruto paused, torn for a
moment. The kid was obviously tired, was it really worth waking him just to
tell him to go to sleep? Naruto thought of himself as lots of things, but
needlessly cruel wasn’t one of them. Carefully, he picked the kid out of the
tub and draped a towel around him, a minor gesture to preserve part of Kutsu’s
dignity.
Patting Kutsu dry with one hand, Naruto carried the genin over to the
guest room and gently deposited the child on his futon. Deep in sleep, Kutsu
rearranged himself on the bed to get more comfortable, and Naruto smiled. Draping
the blanket across the boy, Naruto stood up quietly and shuffled out of the
room.
He leaned up against the hallway wall. “Night, kid” he whispered, half
to himself and half to the sleeping form. He blinked and shook his head, then
padded off towards his own room down the hall.
He still wanted to become the Hokage of Konoha, that had never changed
and it probably never would. Right now, however, Naruto had a job that was even
more important, and he planned to finish it before he moved onto anything else.
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Author’s note: To quote from the great Mark Twain: Rumours of my death
have been greatly exaggerated. See, um…this little thing called life? It
happened. I was writing fine up until I went to Rochester with my sister to
help her settle into college life. Then my computer died, and I lost everything
I had written of chapter nine. That was a bitch. And then school started. And
with school came not only classes and homework, which I can deal with okay, but
also cross country.
Turns out cross country sucks up my time like you wouldn’t believe. Like,
I’m getting home at six every single day. And then I need to do my homework,
eat dinner, all that stuff. It really didn’t leave any time for writing. And on
the weekends, I just couldn’t summon up the will power.
However, cross country is almost over…I’ve got districts on Saturday,
and a week of practice after that because I want to run with the guy who’s
going to state. I’m weird like that. So call it two more weeks, then the season
is over and I get home at a reasonable time each day.
Um…Other than that? Not much. I’ve gotten a couple reviews asking me to
clarify what exactly the story is about, so I dashed this off to get me back in
the writing mood, as well as to answer that question. If you’re not like me and
want a textbook answer, here you go: “Last Step” is about the last step that
Naruto needs to take before becoming Hokage, namely, leading a team of Genin. It
will deal with things pertaining to that last step, both Naruto and the Genin. I’m
trying to keep it mostly focused on Naruto, but the genin characters are
important, so I’ll be spending some time developing them as well, in order to
keep the story interesting and three dimensional. Part of the development of
the genin is the development of their family. There are lots of minor things
I’m referencing. Those will likely be explained in another story. Stop bugging
me. Unless you were polite about it, in which case, if you have any further
questions, please feel free to ask me.
Gemin, I hope college life is going well for you.
If any of you want to talk to me, my aim name is julka121. I’m always
happy to talk to a reviewer. I’ll be online on a semi regular basis in about
two weeks.
Sorry for the long delay! I’ll do my best to start writing on a regular
basis again.